A Letter of Complaint (2)Patronizing Office Help

Dear Dr . Brock ,

I am sending this letter to your home instead of discussing the matter with you in the office because I didn’t want to inter rupt your busy schedule or be overheard by one of your as sociates . And , f rankly , I’m af raid it would be sidet racked if sent to your office .

It conce rns the condescending manner of your nurse, and , to a lesser extent , of your receptionist . While it’s been a minor an noyance for some time , I decided , after the rudeness displayed by these two yesterday , to bring the matter to your a ttention .

I find it inexcu sable that , while taking my temper ature and drawing blood , Mrs . Ga rgoyle persists in berating me with such ins ults as“ You’ve obviously put on a few pounds since last time and Doctor won’t like that one bit”and“Doctor and I feel that you could push yourself away from the table a little sooner .”

While I’m at least thr ee times Nancy’s age she summons me in from the waiting room by my first name . Before scheduling my next appointment she has the audacity to ask ,“ When will we be seeing you again , dearie ?”

Curiou sly such incidents neve r occur when you’re within ea rshot . I have never expected the red carpet treatment , but I am always on time for appointments and pay bills promptly and follow your advice as best I can . It would seem not an unreasonable expectation to bet reated with common courtesy in return .

                            Yours truly .

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CET6六级作文内容分析

本文是一封抱怨信, 信中作者投诉并批评医院里的接待人员及护士的无礼行为。事情虽小但作者的态度却很严肃认真。本文是典型的雅思考试写作Ⅰ的题型。

本文一开头作者就非常彬彬有礼, 接着提出两名无礼的医务人员。在第三、四两段中叙述了无礼行为的具体表现。在最后一段中提出了要求礼貌待人。

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CET6六级作文万能句型：

patronize v . 保护, 庇护
ove rhear v . 偶然听到, 偷听
as sociate n . 同事
sidetr ack v . 指信件投错地方
condescending man ner of your nurse 你们护士的傲慢的态度
to a les ser extent 程度略轻些
receptionist n . 接待人员
minor an noyance 小小的烦恼
rudeness displayed by these two 这两人表现出的无礼
inexcu sable a . 不可原谅的
taking temperatur e 测体温
drawing blood 抽血
berate v . 严厉责备
insult n . 侮辱
put on a few pounds 又增加了几磅体重
Doctor won’t like that one bit 医生不让增加一点体重
push yourself away from the table a little sooner 少吃一点
summon v . 传唤
audacity n . 大胆, 放肆
dearie n . 宝贝
within earshot 听得到的范围内