Advantages of Getting a Loan from the Bank for My Studies
I am a college student f rom a farme r’s family in a mountaineous area . A year ago , I was admitted to a famous univer - sity . Befor e ente ring the unive rsity , I was told tha t the necessary expenses during my four year s’study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan . My parents had collected all the money ther e was to collect , including the money bor rowed f rom their relatives , but it was hardly enough to meet the needs . T hen , good news came that I could resor t to the bank for a loan . I thought it was a good idea and so I did it .
My decision was based on the following con sider ations : First , with the loan I can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus .
Secondly , I don’t have to depend on my par ents who are always wor rying about the enormou s family expenditur e .Thirdly , I will always have the pr ess ure upon me which forces me to study the hard way .
Four thly , I have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible . T o sooner liquidat e the debt , I sometimes work as a home tutor , sometimes a door-to-door salesman , sometimes a restaur ant waiter .
Fifthly , while doing par t-time jobs , I have accumulated a lot of social experience , bitt er sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the time .
I think the above ar e the advantages the loan f rom the bank has brought to me . T hey are beneficial not only to my studies at the unive rsity but also to my future career , because I firmly believe in the saying“ Har sh life produces a diligent and intelligent man .”
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CET6六级作文结构分析：
· 上大学需要费用
* 家庭困难
* 助学贷款好消息
·优点
* 付学费和生活费
* 不依赖父母
* 有压力感
* 生活俭朴, 勤工俭学
* 品尝社会百味
· 结论
* 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人
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CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇记叙文。作者以第一人称来写, 首先记叙希望助学贷款之由来, 主体部分列出了助学贷款之五大优点。最后一句引言“ 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人”结束全文。这类题目的写作必须整理出几条轻重相当的优点, 每条优点的表达意义要完整, 可用一句、两句或多句来写。本文较适合六级水平。
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CET6六级作文万能句型：
loan n . 贷款
mountaineous ar ea 山区
be admitt ed to 被录取入
expen se n . 费用
collect all the money there was to collect 收 集所有能收集到的钱
resort to 求助于
tuition n . 学费
family expenditure 家庭开支
study the ha rd way 努力学习
liquidat e the debt 偿清欠债
home tutor 家教
door- to-door salesman 上门推销员
accumulate v . 积累
social experience 社会经验
bitte r sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the
time 时苦时甜, 但总是很快乐
beneficial a . 有利的
Ha rsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man . 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人