最想背的英语四级作文范文109：On Students' Rating of Their Teachers（含翻译）

英语四级作文题目：
On Students' Rating of Their Teachers 论学生给老师打分

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Directions:
Write a composition entitled On Students' Rating of Their Teachers. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.现在，学生给老师打分已经很普遍；
2.人们对这种做法持不同态度；
3.你的看法。

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英语四级作文写作步骤构思：
步骤1：
审题：这是一篇讲述学生和老师之间的议论文。

步骤2：
引入话题：简述学生给老师打分的现象并加以说明；
展开话题：描述人们对这一现象的不同态度；
话题结论：提出自己的观点，并说出理由支持观点。

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英语四级作文背诵范文：

On Students' Rating of Their Teachers
论学生给老师打分

Recently, it is common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers. Almost every university has been installed the rating system.
最近，大学院校学生给老师打分的现象十分常见。几乎每所大学都设定了评价系统。

However，this phenomenon has aroused great controversy. Some people are in favor of this rating system. They hold that students are the receiver of the knowledge and teaching activity and they have the right to evaluate teachers' teaching. But other people are against it. They believe that the rating system is partial and will influence the normal teaching order.
然而，这种现象己引起了极大的争议。有些人对这个评价系统表示支持，他们认为学生是教学活动与知识的接受者，他们有权评价教师的教学。而有些人则持相反观点，他们认为评价系统具有局限性，会影响到正常的教学秩序。

As far as I am concerned, students' rating of their teacher is necessary. On the one hand, students can find a more effective way for their study. On the other hand, teachers can be aware of their teaching effectiveness and make some necessary improvement. In a word, it is a good method of benefiting both learning and teaching.(139 words)
我认为，学生对老师的评价十分必要。一方面，学生们能够找到更有效的学习方法。另一方面，老师也能够了解他们的教学成效，并做出一些必要的改进。总而言之，这是一种很好的方法，对于教与学都十分有益。

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英语四级作文高分句型解析：
However，this phenomenon has aroused great controversy. 然而，这种现象己引起了极大的争议。
点评：这句话的加分点是活用了“arouse”这个词，“aroused great controversy”表示“引起很大的争议”。

Teachers can be aware of their teaching effectiveness and make some necessary improvement. 老师也能够了解他们的教学成效，并做出一些必要的改进。
点评：这句话中运用了多个名词化的短语或名词，比如“effectiveness”、“improvement”等，使得文章很正式，这也是四级作文的一个加分点。
 
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英语四级作文加分词：
install  [in'stɔ:l]    v.安装，设置
partial  ['pa:rʃl]    adj.不公平的
controversy  ['ka:ntrəvə:rsi]    n.争议，辩论
effective  [i'fektiv]    n.有效的
in favor of    支持
be aware of …     知道……
evaluate  [i'væljueit]    v.评判，评价